First, some of the material I had created seemed not to be serious enough or appropriate for the point I was trying to make. Part of this re-scripting has established Isolda's occupation as a composer of parables and reclassified her as an adamant wordsmith, rather than an adamant sentinel (see canon notes concerning Wolfremic humorology).
Another reason was to cut out less relevant material, because I'm probably not going to fit all of Chapter 2 into three issues, like I promised implicitly on the cover of Issue #4 (labeled as Chapter 2, part 1 of 3) without lengthening the issues to 32 pages or more. I'll have to see what I can do to keep this promise.
And now, the Thanksgiving update:
Using the colors here, I estimate my progress as follows:
So here we go... to my American readers, a safe and Happy Thanksgiving! (And please spend it giving thanks with family, and not defeating the purpose by stampede-shopping for things you don't really need to replace the things for which you might have just given thanks.)
To the rest of the world, a happy and safe third-Thursday-Friday-and-weekend-in-November!
